The // Hanging skeleton and //Mael is not supposed to be said, it is to make it clear who actually says the line Emotions will be displayed as: text {emotion} Alem and Mael are the same person. Mael is the original person, who is died long time ago. Alem is some kind of his appearence, that he uses to guard the graveyard. The main reason why he guards it isn't to protect whatever is inside from other people, but to protect the people from whatever is inside. [1/3] Alem: You might want to leave. {dark, slow, serious; the word "leave" should be highlighted somehow} There is nothing in this graveyard. {dark, slow, serious; the word "this" should be highlighted somehow} This place is private. {dark, slow, serious; the word "place" should be highlighted somehow} --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [1/1] Alem: I have warned you... {louder, dark, not angry} {A strong spiritual force pulls you towards the graveyard, making it impossible to leave the area any other way than walking.} --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- �7[1/1] �2�kXXXXXXX�2: �aOh, my arm.. It's ba... {old, dying voice, quiet; read from the word "Oh" on} // Hanging skeleton --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- {Once, there was a man,} {[1/4]} --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- {who helped the spirits pass on,} {[2/4]} --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- {however he was still} {[3/4]} --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- {mortal.} --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- {This door appears to be locked. Perhaps a key could be used...} --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [1/2] ???: You were warned not to enter this forsaken place. {dark, slow, serious} // Mael But since you have made it thusfar, I suppose I shall show you the truth... {still slow and serious, but with a sigh} //Mael --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [1/3] Mael: Do you understand now? {dark} Then leave, and forget the horrors you have witnessed here today... {dark, firm} They are safer here. {quieter, dark} --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [1/1] Alem: I have nothing more to say. Take these. {firm}